I wanted to received some feedback from one of my close friends regarding my final product. I used iMessage as an application to conduct the feedback, as it meant I could easily send over a screenshot of my work too.
As demonstrated below, Katie has given me some constructive criticism and advised me to add a transparent background behind the main article. I think this could potentially look really good so therefore, I tried it out.

Below is a screenshot of what the main article now looks like with a transparent background colour placed behind the text. I used the 'magic wand' tool on InDesign to match the colour red from one of the lifeguard's uniform.
However, where I have turned down the transparency level to 15%, the colour has changed slightly. However, I think it is an effective adaption because it adds more colour to the overall look of my double page spread.

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