Production: Audience feedback

As a class, we have created audience feedback questionnaires, I found this really helpful as it has now given me a list of things that I can work towards improving in order to make my products better. 

After reviewing my audience feedback, I have now collated a to do list: 

1. Remove the cutaway of the disabled hoist when talking about staff training
2. Add more quotes in red on double page spread 
3. Add a web address on double page spread 
4. Add some bylines, the name of the writer, as well as captions on the images 
5. Put the Channel 4 logo on the double page spread 
6. Add in other featuring programmes from Channel 4
7. Avoid showing too much white background between images 
8. Put some images between the text
9. See how the advert looks if you crop out the door in the background 

The comments that I have received in regards to my voice-over are all very positive. One person has said that it is slightly too slow. I will review this and see what parts are too slow and which ones I should think about adapting.
Furthermore, I also plan to watch my documentary back and check that the audio can be heard clearly over the music the whole way through. The voice-over is ultimately the element that is more important for the audience to be able to hear, so I want to make sure this takes place throughout the whole documentary.

People said that everything in my documentary is relevant to the topic, and the conclusion I am aiming to get to. However, one comment stated that the chair lift cutaway when explaining about staff training isn't that relevant.
I do agree with this opinion as it is a cutaway I included because I felt as though the rescue between the two lifeguards went on for too long. However, after taking it out I don't think it is really needed, and looks better without it being there.

I found the feedback that I received from this question very helpful, and a lot of it I have decided to put onto my to do list. Reflecting on the product I have created for my double page spread, I think adding some of these conventions I have been suggested will really help improving it.

 I am going to add some more red text within the article as I think the large amount of text comes across as being quite intimidating for the target audience, and it also make it less likely for them to read it all. Furthermore, to improve this further I plan to see how it looks to have images placed within the article. 

This was also a question that I have received very helpful feedback from. I now plan to make sure I make some of the white background less visible. The images are fairly spaced out at the moment, so I can push them closer together and maybe even gather some more images to place within the article itself.