This is my near to final edit. I am very proud of my progress so far. I have also made sure I have been gathering focus group feedback to ensure it is the best it can be, this has helped me out considerably.
I have put this into a YouTube video due to the fact that the file was too large to present in a Vimeo.
I received some teacher feedback and this is a screenshot of some of the ideas I was told to improve on.
Some of the main things I am going to change are:
I received some teacher feedback and this is a screenshot of some of the ideas I was told to improve on.
Some of the main things I am going to change are:
- Ensure all of the font is same to provide a sense of branding
- Re-do the voice-over with more professional equipment
- Speak in 3rd person when doing this
- Cut out some unnecessary shots that do not fit the narrative
- Film some extra footage of the Southend RNLI crew
- Add in some more cutaways over the interview footage
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