I have taken into account the feedback that I received from my audience questionnaire, and have now started to make some changes to my double page spread. I have included screenshots of these changes down below.
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| I have adapted this part of my double page spread by moving the images closer together. I have therefore, reduced the amount of white background behind the images, as I think this aspect looked slightly less professional. Also, I have added one more image to fill the space a bit more, this is an image of a lifeguard at Clements Hall. The effect of having the images placed like this is now more prominent, which is the effect I wanted to achieve. |
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| The audience from my questionnaire said that it would be a good idea to place the Channel 4 logo in the corner of my double page spread. This has the effect of enhancing the overall brand identity due to the fact that the logo is also placed on the newspaper advert. After experimenting around with the location of the logo, I decided that it was the most visible over the image with water as the background. I is now very clear and stands to well to the audience. |
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| Also, I have now added in a small byline at the side of my double page spread. It reads 'Photography by Ella chapman.' I believe this is a very professional aspect and is a small detail that still looks effective. Furthermore, it is also a convention of already existing products, which is an inventive to me to include on my own product. |
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| Another frequent comment that I received from looking at the responses from my questionnaire was that I should add in a website. I have also done this on my newspaper advert, so to be consistent I also added this to my double page spread. I decided to have the font the same as my main article to maintain the house style across all of my products. |
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